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Comment: 10,0:00:17.59,0:00:25.25,Default,,0,0,0,,We now call to order the Ekklesia hearing of former Apathoia troop commander Orka. {Ekklesia is now apparently the name of their group}
Comment: 10,0:00:25.71,0:00:29.72,Default,,0,0,0,,With regards to the sinners of Falaina who were exiled to the Great Sand Ocean,
Comment: 10,0:00:29.72,0:00:36.39,Default,,0,0,0,,the United Kingdom of Siderasia and the other countries were never supposed to find them. {## 'related' seems to suggest 'allied' or kind of otherwise linked (Europeans, or something); is that the case here? If it is, I'd like this to be replaced by 'their allies' or something more specific. 'related countries' is very weak. 'were never to' reads as past tense indicating that it did not ever happen ('I was never to go'), rather than a... prescriptive? 'discover' meanwhile is a little odd just because they're not an unknown entity}
Comment: 10,0:00:29.72,0:00:36.39,Default,,0,0,0,,the United Kingdom of Siderasia and related countries were never to discover them.
Comment: 10,0:00:36.39,0:00:40.53,Default,,0,0,0,,The ocean area Falaina was banished to is an evil region.
Comment: 10,0:00:40.53,0:00:43.73,Default,,0,0,0,,It should have rejected approach, discovery, and interference.
Comment: 10,0:00:49.31,0:00:52.19,Default,,0,0,0,,The one who demanded it be carried out...
Comment: 10,0:00:52.19,0:00:53.95,Default,,0,0,0,,was you.
Comment: 10,0:00:54.53,0:01:02.25,Default,,0,0,0,,In the first place, the exile of 93 years ago was meant to be a cautionary tale for our people.
Comment: 10,0:01:02.25,0:01:11.47,Default,,10,10,0,,The sinners' ugly emotional display of strife and conflict was to demonstrate the foolishness of emotions to them.
Comment: 10,0:01:11.47,0:01:15.57,Default,,0,0,0,,That is the reason you gave to convince us and His Majesty.
Comment: 10,0:01:17.39,0:01:19.85,Default,,0,0,0,,failed.
Comment: 10,0:01:23.77,0:01:28.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Bearer of ultimate reponsibility for the operation, Apathoia Commander-in-Chief Orka; {## guess I really should just give the whole thing a once over first. semicolons in lists are something I'm fond of, and I personally find just the commas a little weird here, but this is up to you}
Comment: 10,0:01:23.77,0:01:28.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Leader and responsible party of this plan, Apathoia Commander-in-Chief Orka, {## guess I really should just give the whole thing a once over first}
Comment: 10,0:01:28.69,0:01:34.25,Default,,0,0,0,,Skylos Commander Araphne; and the hundred names undermentioned are hereby sentenced to death. {## by the way, this guy is totally 'Arachne', but it's not worth doing until batch. General is a specific military term and not appropriate here, so I went with what we were using before (in vacuum, might go for something like 'Captain', just for being in charge of the ship, rather than a rank per se)}
Comment: 10,0:01:28.69,0:01:34.25,Default,,0,0,0,,Skylos General Araphne; and the hundred names below are sentenced to death.
Comment: 10,0:01:38.89,0:01:42.91,Default,,0,0,0,,this is the path to glory? {## 'greatest of tales' is so, so weird in English. If you want to revert, change 'would' to 'will', and 'that' to 'this'}
Comment: 10,0:01:38.89,0:01:42.91,Default,,0,0,0,,that would lead to the greatest of tales?
Comment: 10,0:01:54.63,0:01:57.80,Default,,0,0,0,,Do not be swayed by his provocations!
Comment: 10,0:01:58.38,0:02:03.98,Default,,0,0,0,,Heaven tore off a piece of its body and scattered it upon the land.
Comment: 10,0:01:58.38,0:02:03.98,Default,,0,0,0,,Heaven tore off a piece of its body and scattered it down onto the land.
Comment: 10,0:02:03.98,0:02:08.45,Default,,0,0,0,,That brought with it the extinction of ancient and evil culture.
Comment: 10,0:02:08.45,0:02:12.61,Default,,0,0,0,,We refer to this event as the Rain of Kathartirio. {purgatory in Greek, I did my best}
Comment: 10,0:02:23.58,0:02:30.38,Default,,0,0,0,,and decided to offer the source of our past mistakes, our hearts, to them in exchange for thier power.
Comment: 10,0:02:30.38,0:02:35.64,Default,,0,0,0,,At that moment, the two races of man were born. {## 'thenceforth' is a continuative; you have a choice here between 'two races were born', and 'all people who were born belonged to one of two races', and the former is a single event, and the latter a continuative. I'm going to roll with the former. For reference, the latter'd be something like 'Thenceforth, all men (gender neutral 'man') were born as one of two types.'}
Comment: 10,0:02:30.38,0:02:35.64,Default,,0,0,0,,Thenceforth, two types of people were born into this world.
Comment: 10,0:02:36.55,0:02:40.48,Default,,0,0,0,,Those who are the angels of nous, and those who are not.
Comment: 10,0:02:40.48,0:02:44.47,Default,,0,0,0,,We call those who are are Marked, while the others are Unmarked.
Comment: 10,0:02:45.17,0:02:50.31,Default,,0,0,0,,Now then, you may have all forgotten the next part of the story.
Comment: 10,0:02:57.92,0:03:02.16,Default,,0,0,0,,The strongest of warriors created by the power of the nous.
Comment: 10,0:03:02.16,0:03:04.41,Default,,0,0,0,,Daimons are naught more than a legend.
Comment: 10,0:03:04.85,0:03:09.42,Default,,0,0,0,,We have been made to forget them as a product of the past!
Comment: 10,0:03:09.42,0:03:12.45,Default,,0,0,0,,But we can no longer avert our eyes to the truth!
Comment: 10,0:03:18.91,0:03:21.66,Default,,0,0,0,,I will say this as clearly as possible! {## the thing is that he's never declared this, and it's more of a rephrasal}
Comment: 10,0:03:18.91,0:03:21.66,Default,,0,0,0,,I will declare it once more!
Comment: 10,0:03:26.12,0:03:32.15,Default,,0,0,0,,They are the incarnation of sin with the power to capsize the ark our nation lives on!
Comment: 10,0:03:48.11,0:03:48.79,Default,,0,0,0,,I just—
Comment: 10,0:04:24.45,0:04:26.15,Default,,0,0,0,,Right, it was you.
Comment: 10,0:04:26.15,0:04:32.04,Default,,0,0,0,,Please do try to remember that you all hold partial responsibility, even if you weren't on the field. {## I had to cut 'sinking a nous' to get this to two lines, but it's not important anyway. 'all' is here to reinforce the plural, which weakens with every instance of 'you'}
Comment: 10,0:04:26.15,0:04:32.04,Default,,0,0,0,,Even if you were not on the battlefield, please do not forget your liability in the sinking of a nous.
Comment: 10,0:04:32.79,0:04:37.24,Default,,0,0,0,,I suppose it is about time to unbind the new chapter of this story.
Comment: 10,0:04:38.99,0:04:44.94,Default,,0,0,0,,In the near future, there is a possibility a second Rain of Kathartirio will fall.
Comment: 10,0:04:51.32,0:04:55.76,Default,,0,0,0,,If it is not washed once again, this world will not be purified.
Comment: 10,0:04:55.76,0:05:00.11,Default,,0,0,0,,When that time comes, we must be able to protect the ark of our country.
Comment: 10,0:05:10.27,0:05:14.75,Default,,0,0,0,,And who will take on the responsibility of eliminating the daimons? {## forgive me my arrogance if I'm wrong, but isn't this more like 'And who would be willing to take on the elimination of the daimons?' It seems to make more sense with the following lines. i.e. attempting to kill daimons is risky, and who would be willing to try it?. throw 'And who... Who' at the beginning if you like. mind that 'will' is here for the later lines; otherwise, 'would' would be favoured}
Comment: 10,0:05:10.27,0:05:14.75,Default,,0,0,0,,Who... Who said we should eliminate the daimons?
Comment: 10,0:05:26.82,0:05:34.52,Default,,0,0,0,,Then join the sunken ancient ruins if you like, \Nfollowing your own destruction with your rusted minds! {## I have no idea what this sentence means, English or Japanese. 'Make like the sunken ancient ruins, and (use your rusted minds to follow the story of your own destruction to the end)'? It doesn't follow, in either case, that he would randomly shout this out, so I'm just going to give up and fudge the English into making sense}
Comment: 10,0:05:26.90,0:05:34.52,Default,,0,0,0,,Join the sunken ancient ruins with your rusted minds \Nand follow the story of your destruction until the end!
Comment: 10,0:05:39.97,0:05:42.11,Default,,0,0,0,,I can capture the daimon.
Comment: 10,0:05:46.46,0:05:48.70,Default,,0,0,0,,I have the ability to do so. {## 'only' is too semantically meaningful, and too much lacking support}
Comment: 10,0:05:52.41,0:05:57.44,Default,,0,0,0,,Their existence can lead us to becoming the supreme rulers of the world.
Comment: 10,0:06:04.63,0:06:07.40,Default,,0,0,0,,Let us forgive him for everything before meeting the daimon.
Comment: 10,0:06:10.20,0:06:13.85,Default,,0,0,0,,Everything was done at Skylos General Araphne's sole discretion.
Comment: 10,0:06:14.67,0:06:17.99,Default,,0,0,0,,Very well. We leave the responsibility of \Ndealing with your own subordinates to you. {## 'take responsibility' (apart from, uh, the obvious connotations) reads as a reprimand, which it isn't here}
Comment: 10,0:06:14.67,0:06:17.99,Default,,0,0,0,,Very well. Take responsibility for dealing with your own subordinates.
Comment: 10,0:06:24.25,0:06:28.11,Default,,0,0,0,,May servants of the nous be blessed with divine grace.
Comment: 10,0:06:58.61,0:07:03.23,Default,,0,0,0,,I am well aware. But I must try to keep up appearances. {## uh, TLC? isn't this 'At the same time, I can't help but try to keep up appearances in front of you.', or the like? It doesn't really follow from the prior line otherwise. changed with the object of 'but i'm trying to make it seem like it has'}
Comment: 10,0:06:58.61,0:07:03.23,Default,,0,0,0,,I am well aware. At the same time, I know it is pointless to put on a facade with you.
Comment: 10,0:07:06.62,0:07:09.99,Default,,0,0,0,,I wish to make use of warship Kalharius. {couldn't find a reference for this name}
Comment: 10,0:07:13.84,0:07:19.16,Default,,0,0,0,,If the commander gives his permission, the committee will have nothing to say.
Comment: 10,0:07:29.01,0:07:30.13,Default,,0,0,0,,I've long forgotten.
Comment: 10,0:07:30.91,0:07:36.10,Default,,0,0,0,,I will not request an immediate answer. A few days delay does me no harm.
Comment: 10,0:07:44.49,0:07:47.13,Default,,0,0,0,,What did you speak about? {## only to make my next edit passable}
Comment: 10,0:07:44.49,0:07:47.13,Default,,0,0,0,,What were you talking about?
Comment: 10,0:07:48.96,0:07:50.71,Default,,0,0,0,,Talk of dreams. {ep title}{## i was actually thinking about this last episode, but since it's always a crapshoot didn't bother mentioning it. I get a feeling that this isn't 'story' or anything like that, but just the nominal of 'hanasu' (and I think those are slightly different), and I don't think this is a particular dream, or if it is that its particularity is important, but rather 'Dreams' as a whole being used as the modifier. so, like 'dream talk'. 'a story from a dream' is also pretty specific, and from our perspective that conversation doesn't seem like that at all. but 'talk of dreams' widens the scope enough that it's maybe passable. but of course it's a crapshoot and this is up to you. just my 2c}
Comment: 10,0:07:48.96,0:07:50.71,Default,,0,0,0,,A story from a dream. {ep title}
Comment: 10,0:07:53.45,0:07:56.05,Default,,0,0,0,,The Marked saw the same dream? {or had, if you want to appease that one guy}
Comment: 10,0:09:12.57,0:09:15.35,Default - th,,0,0,0,,they flash their light at the same rhythm.
Comment: 10,0:09:16.05,0:09:19.95,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Migratory birds know where to go as soon as they're born.
Comment: 10,0:09:26.77,0:09:28.87,Default - th,,0,0,0,,How to move the Mud Whale.
Comment: 10,0:09:31.57,0:09:34.60,Default,,0,0,0,,That playing around is enough to move it...
Comment: 10,0:09:31.57,0:09:34.60,Default,,0,0,0,,Playing around is enough to move it...
Comment: 10,0:09:34.60,0:09:37.05,Default,,0,0,0,,Man, how very like this island.
Comment: 10,0:09:46.00,0:09:50.08,Default,,0,0,0,,Have you noticed that the proportion of youngsters is too high?
Comment: 10,0:10:19.32,0:10:22.64,Default,,0,0,0,,This is our true departure.
Comment: 10,0:10:28.67,0:10:33.98,Default,,0,0,0,,It's a bit lonely seeing that only the Marked know how to do it.
Comment: 10,0:10:52.83,0:10:55.84,Default,,0,0,0,,Was this island plagued by an epidemic?
Comment: 10,0:11:04.34,0:11:09.54,Default,,0,0,0,,Because the Marked are short-lived, it results in an abundance of young people.
Comment: 10,0:11:14.34,0:11:18.96,Default,,0,0,0,,However, I have never encountered another civilization as short-lived as yours.
Comment: 10,0:11:40.93,0:11:44.57,Default,,0,0,0,,Hurry up! I will show you the world. {## I don't like 'come' just because Suou's ostensibly in the lead. it's meant as 'come [to where i am and start guiding me]' but reads more as 'come [to your room]'}
Comment: 10,0:11:40.93,0:11:44.57,Default,,0,0,0,,Hurry up and come! I will show you the world.
Comment: 10,0:12:04.09,0:12:06.17,Default,,0,0,0,,I can't quite fathom it...
Comment: 10,0:12:10.07,0:12:10.96,Default,,0,0,0,,Look closely.
Comment: 10,0:12:11.31,0:12:16.12,Default,,0,0,0,,This is the United Kingdom of Siderasia, of which Amonlogia is a part. {## as the mud whale guys don't really know what the UK is; if they did, 'here''d be fine. TLC: can you take a close look at 'zoku suru' here? my understanding so far has been that Amonlogia's a constituent state of Siderasia (a la England of the UK), and it doesn't make sense to say e.g. the United Kingdom of Great Britain under the control of England, barring snarky political stuff. There are no other references to 'Amonlogia' as a family or house name, also}
Comment: 10,0:12:11.31,0:12:16.12,Default,,0,0,0,,Here is the United Kingdom of Siderasia under the control of the Amonlogia.
Comment: 10,0:12:21.78,0:12:27.65,Default,,0,0,0,,And here is where we were nearly shipwrecked by a bizarre current.
Comment: 10,0:12:50.91,0:12:56.40,Default,,0,0,0,,but I endeavored to overcome dangers at sea to finally discover this island!
Comment: 10,0:13:03.43,0:13:07.79,Default,,0,0,0,,That's why the rudderless Mud Whale was unable to go anywhere else.
Comment: 10,0:13:10.42,0:13:14.63,Default,,0,0,0,,This ocean acted as a natural prison.
Comment: 10,0:13:22.69,0:13:28.40,Default,,0,0,0,,Come under our wing, and we may protect you weak, caged fledglings.
Comment: 10,0:13:29.70,0:13:36.05,Default,,0,0,0,,The nation we oppose is a strange one further west of the seas that bears no name of its own. {## to explicitly link this as the Empire, and not just some random other one}
Comment: 10,0:13:29.70,0:13:36.05,Default,,0,0,0,,We oppose a strange nation further west in the seas that bears no name of its own.
Comment: 10,0:13:37.64,0:13:43.73,Default,,0,0,0,,Though I don't know the reason, it seems that even its citizens do not have real names either.
Comment: 10,0:13:48.84,0:13:52.85,Default,,0,0,0,,With a rudder, it should now be able to escape the currents.
Comment: 10,0:13:54.68,0:13:56.46,Default,,0,0,0,,And beyond it...
Comment: 10,0:14:36.14,0:14:38.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Your skin color is different than the others of this island. {wow, it only takes 93 years to whitewash an entire race of people?}
Comment: 10,0:15:00.00,0:15:05.45,Default,,0,0,0,,Do you think my country will accept a race of people who are mysteriously short-lived?
Comment: 10,0:15:10.01,0:15:12.34,Default,,0,0,0,,You know the reason behind it, don't you? {## a plain statement is weird}
Comment: 10,0:15:10.01,0:15:12.34,Default,,0,0,0,,You know the reason behind it.
Comment: 10,0:15:32.05,0:15:35.41,Default,,0,0,0,,The Mud Whale... this ship?
Comment: 10,0:15:38.16,0:15:42.96,Default,,0,0,0,,This ship as well as the ships of the Empire are kept afloat by the living beings called nous.
Comment: 10,0:15:51.76,0:15:54.26,Default,,0,0,0,,Those are the people known as Marked.
Comment: 10,0:15:54.63,0:15:58.70,Default,,0,0,0,,But this island's nous, Falaina, has a different role.
Comment: 10,0:16:01.78,0:16:08.15,Default,,0,0,0,,What Falaina eats in order to grant thymia and keep this island afloat, {## reworked this whole big because 'are those who live on the Mud Whale: the life force of the Marked' implies that the life force is what lives on the Mud Whale}
Comment: 10,0:16:01.78,0:16:08.15,Default,,0,0,0,,What Falaina eats in order to grant thymia and keep this island afloat...
Comment: 10,0:16:10.88,0:16:12.28,Default,,0,0,0,,what it takes from those on the Mud Whale,
Comment: 10,0:16:10.88,0:16:12.28,Default,,0,0,0,,are those who live on the Mud Whale:
Comment: 10,0:16:15.13,0:16:16.74,Default,,0,0,0,,The life force of the Marked.
Comment: 10,0:16:40.77,0:16:42.64,Default,,0,0,0,,both choices are difficult.
Comment: 10,0:16:46.40,0:16:48.27,Default,,0,0,0,,Somehow I had already known. {## 'suspicion' is just too weak to hold up the rest of the lines}
Comment: 10,0:16:50.63,0:16:52.19,Default - th,,0,0,0,,But I had pretended not to see. {## tense stuff again, i'm going with from the future}{it's not. you can tell extremely clearly that he's thinking this right now, it's not one of his records}
Comment: 10,0:16:53.56,0:16:55.13,Default - th,,0,0,0,,I hadn't wanted to know.
Comment: 10,0:16:55.94,0:16:57.70,Default - th,,0,0,0,,And so I had avoided it.
Comment: 10,0:16:58.14,0:16:59.13,Default - th,,0,0,0,,All that time.
Comment: 10,0:17:21.28,0:17:22.20,Default,,0,0,0,,It's fine.
Comment: 10,0:17:49.90,0:17:52.63,Default,,0,0,0,,Why would they make us gather like this?
Comment: 10,0:18:13.27,0:18:14.99,Default,,0,0,0,,This is a call to action to join us!
Comment: 10,0:18:19.20,0:18:24.03,Default,,0,0,0,,But we also don't care about getting every single of of you to approve of us.
Comment: 10,0:18:24.03,0:18:33.25,Default,,10,10,0,,We've always been unsure of what to do, seeing as you all live like puppets without a single doubt about the world.
Comment: 10,0:18:24.03,0:18:33.25,Default,,10,10,0,,We've always been unsure of what to do seeing how you live like puppets without a single doubt about the world.
Comment: 10,0:18:33.25,0:18:39.51,Default,,0,0,0,,We've been avoidant in the corners of the Mud Whale because we couldn't clear this uncertainty.
Comment: 10,0:18:47.55,0:18:52.27,Default,,0,0,0,,I heard that the Mud Whale is heading toward \Nthe country of the people who boarded us.
Comment: 10,0:19:11.27,0:19:15.38,Default,,0,0,0,,How many Marked do you think died in the battle we fought?
Comment: 10,0:19:21.89,0:19:24.35,Default,,0,0,0,,Because so many died you don't want to remember!
Comment: 10,0:19:25.59,0:19:30.39,Default,,0,0,0,,The only Unmarked that died in the Skylos' attack was Hakuji from the Council.
Comment: 10,0:19:31.81,0:19:35.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Try thinking back on what the plan the Council came up with was!
Comment: 10,0:19:42.67,0:19:47.16,Default,,0,0,0,,What other choice did we have? The Unmarked can't even fight because they don't have thymia!
Comment: 10,0:20:00.01,0:20:04.00,Default,,0,0,0,,They can't use thymia, or do anything for themselves.
Comment: 10,0:20:00.01,0:20:04.00,Default,,0,0,0,,They can't use thymia, can't do anything for themselves.
Comment: 10,0:20:07.48,0:20:11.16,Default,,0,0,0,,They're the ones who made a plan that benefits them.
Comment: 10,0:20:11.16,0:20:15.61,Default,,0,0,0,,Are we disposable garbage, to be sent to die? {## unless you really want 'rags' for some reason; it's pretty weird}
Comment: 10,0:20:11.16,0:20:15.61,Default,,0,0,0,,They shouldn't be allowed to use us like rags and let us be massacred!
Comment: 10,0:20:20.78,0:20:25.49,Default,,0,0,0,,Get it through your heads that the "order" of the Mud Whale is a corrupted delusion!
Comment: 10,0:20:25.91,0:20:29.20,Default,,0,0,0,,We will free the Marked from the reign of the Unmarked!
Comment: 10,0:20:29.63,0:20:31.96,Default,,0,0,0,,The Marked will decide were we go!
Comment: 10,0:20:32.47,0:20:38.44,Default,,0,0,0,,We Marked of the Purple Wing Helm hold all the power of this ship!
Comment: 10,0:20:39.30,0:20:42.17,Default,,0,0,0,,Thymia is the power that moves the Mud Whale!
Comment: 10,0:20:52.07,0:20:54.24,Default,,0,0,0,,Are you saying to defy the Council?
Comment: 10,0:21:15.55,0:21:18.24,Default,,0,0,0,,You're really a lapdog of the Unmarked now.
Comment: 10,0:21:23.85,0:21:25.82,Default,,0,0,0,,I don't want to see you acting cheap. {sleazy}
Comment: 10,0:21:25.82,0:21:27.05,Default,,0,0,0,,Cheap?
Comment: 10,0:21:43.19,0:21:49.32,Default,,0,0,0,,Hey, hey, what's wrong? Did you lose your power along with your ambition?
Comment: 10,0:21:57.84,0:22:01.70,Default,,0,0,0,,You're a horrifying monster who killed countless enemies.
Comment: 10,0:22:02.62,0:22:04.46,Default,,0,0,0,,Listen up, everyone!
Comment: 0,0:22:09.80,0:22:09.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{ED first frame after episode title}
Comment: 0,0:22:10.72,0:22:17.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6828,7128,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}Staring into the dried ocean remains
Comment: 0,0:22:10.72,0:22:17.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6828,7128,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}kawaita umi no ato nozonde
Comment: 1,0:22:10.72,0:22:17.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6828,7128,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6820,7170,\1a&HFF&)}Staring into the dried ocean remains
Comment: 1,0:22:10.72,0:22:17.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6828,7128,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6820,7170,\1a&HFF&)}kawaita umi no ato nozonde
Comment: 2,0:22:10.72,0:22:17.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6828,7128,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}S{*\c&H9AC7F9&}t{*\c&H97C2F3&}a{*\c&H93BEED&}r{*\c&H8FB9E7&}i{*\c&H8BB4E1&}n{*\c&H88AFDB&}g {*\c&H80A5CF&}i{*\c&H7CA1C9&}n{*\c&H799CC3&}t{\c&H7597BD&}o {*\c&H7CA0C8&}t{*\c&H7FA4CE&}h{*\c&H83A9D3&}e {*\c&H8AB2DE&}d{*\c&H8DB6E4&}r{*\c&H90BAE9&}i{*\c&H94BFEE&}e{*\c&H97C3F4&}d {\c&H9ECCFF&}o{*\c&H9BC8FA&}c{*\c&H98C4F5&}e{*\c&H95C0F0&}a{*\c&H91BCEB&}n {*\c&H8BB4E1&}r{*\c&H88AFDB&}e{*\c&H85ABD6&}m{*\c&H82A7D1&}a{*\c&H7EA3CC&}i{*\c&H7B9FC7&}n{*\c&H789BC2&}s{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 2,0:22:10.72,0:22:17.85,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6828,7128,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}k{*\c&H99C5F7&}a{*\c&H94BFEE&}w{*\c&H8FB8E6&}a{*\c&H8AB2DE&}i{*\c&H84ABD6&}t{*\c&H7FA4CE&}a {\c&H7597BD&}u{*\c&H7A9DC4&}m{*\c&H7EA3CC&}i {*\c&H87AFDA&}n{*\c&H8CB4E2&}o {*\c&H95C0F0&}a{*\c&H99C6F8&}t{\c&H9ECCFF&}o {*\c&H95C0F0&}n{*\c&H90BAE9&}o{*\c&H8CB4E2&}z{*\c&H87AFDA&}o{*\c&H83A9D3&}n{*\c&H7EA3CC&}d{*\c&H7A9DC4&}e{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 0,0:22:17.85,0:22:24.99,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6798,7049,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}Imagining a river that may have flowed
Comment: 0,0:22:17.85,0:22:24.99,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6798,7049,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}mada minu taiga wo egaku
Comment: 1,0:22:17.85,0:22:24.99,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6798,7049,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6750,7100,\1a&HFF&)}Imagining a river that may have flowed
Comment: 1,0:22:17.85,0:22:24.99,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6798,7049,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6750,7100,\1a&HFF&)}mada minu taiga wo egaku
Comment: 2,0:22:17.85,0:22:24.99,ED,,0,0,0,,{\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6798,7049,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}I{*\c&H9BC8FA&}m{*\c&H97C3F4&}a{*\c&H94BFEE&}g{*\c&H90BAE9&}i{*\c&H8DB6E4&}n{*\c&H8AB2DE&}i{*\c&H86ADD8&}n{*\c&H83A9D3&}g {*\c&H7CA0C8&}a {\c&H7597BD&}r{*\c&H789BC2&}i{*\c&H7CA0C8&}v{*\c&H7FA4CE&}e{*\c&H83A9D3&}r {*\c&H8AB2DE&}t{*\c&H8DB6E4&}h{*\c&H90BAE9&}a{*\c&H94BFEE&}t {*\c&H9BC8FA&}m{\c&H9ECCFF&}a{*\c&H9BC8FA&}y {*\c&H95C1F1&}h{*\c&H92BDEC&}a{*\c&H8FB9E7&}v{*\c&H8CB5E3&}e {*\c&H87AED9&}f{*\c&H84AAD5&}l{*\c&H81A6D0&}o{*\c&H7EA2CB&}w{*\c&H7B9FC6&}e{*\c&H789BC2&}d{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 2,0:22:17.85,0:22:24.99,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6798,7049,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}m{*\c&H99C5F7&}a{*\c&H94BFEE&}d{*\c&H8FB8E6&}a {*\c&H84ABD6&}m{*\c&H7FA4CE&}i{*\c&H7A9EC5&}n{\c&H7597BD&}u {*\c&H7FA4CE&}t{*\c&H84ABD6&}a{*\c&H8AB2DE&}i{*\c&H8FB8E6&}g{*\c&H94BFEE&}a {\c&H9ECCFF&}w{*\c&H99C5F7&}o {*\c&H8FB8E6&}e{*\c&H8AB2DE&}g{*\c&H84ABD6&}a{*\c&H7FA4CE&}k{*\c&H7A9EC5&}u{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 0,0:22:24.99,0:22:32.20,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6914,7206,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}If my heart had remained imprisoned
Comment: 0,0:22:24.99,0:22:32.20,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6914,7206,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}toraware no kokoro no mama nara
Comment: 1,0:22:24.99,0:22:32.20,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6914,7206,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6890,7240,\1a&HFF&)}If my heart had remained imprisoned
Comment: 1,0:22:24.99,0:22:32.20,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6914,7206,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6890,7240,\1a&HFF&)}toraware no kokoro no mama nara
Comment: 2,0:22:24.99,0:22:32.20,ED,,0,0,0,,{\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6914,7206,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}I{*\c&H9BC8FA&}f {*\c&H94BFEE&}m{*\c&H90BAE9&}y {*\c&H8AB2DE&}h{*\c&H86ADD8&}e{*\c&H83A9D3&}a{*\c&H7FA4CE&}r{*\c&H7CA0C8&}t {\c&H7597BD&}h{*\c&H799CC3&}a{*\c&H7CA1C9&}d {*\c&H84AAD5&}r{*\c&H88AFDB&}e{*\c&H8BB4E1&}m{*\c&H8FB9E7&}a{*\c&H93BEED&}i{*\c&H97C2F3&}n{*\c&H9AC7F9&}e{\c&H9ECCFF&}d {*\c&H97C3F4&}i{*\c&H94BFEE&}m{*\c&H90BAE9&}p{*\c&H8DB6E4&}r{*\c&H8AB2DE&}i{*\c&H86ADD8&}s{*\c&H83A9D3&}o{*\c&H7FA4CE&}n{*\c&H7CA0C8&}e{*\c&H789BC2&}d{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 2,0:22:24.99,0:22:32.20,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6914,7206,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}t{*\c&H9AC7F8&}o{*\c&H96C1F2&}r{*\c&H92BCEB&}a{*\c&H8EB7E5&}w{*\c&H8AB2DE&}a{*\c&H85ACD7&}r{*\c&H81A7D1&}e {*\c&H799CC4&}n{\c&H7597BD&}o {*\c&H7DA2CA&}k{*\c&H81A7D1&}o{*\c&H85ACD7&}k{*\c&H8AB2DE&}o{*\c&H8EB7E5&}r{*\c&H92BCEB&}o {*\c&H9AC7F8&}n{\c&H9ECCFF&}o {*\c&H97C2F3&}m{*\c&H93BEED&}a{*\c&H8FB9E7&}m{*\c&H8BB4E1&}a {*\c&H84AAD5&}n{*\c&H80A5CF&}a{*\c&H7CA1C9&}r{*\c&H799CC3&}a{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 10,0:22:25.95,0:22:29.21,Default,,0,0,0,,We'll be strong and live free.
Comment: 0,0:22:32.20,0:22:39.46,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6931,7223,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}I could have lived unaware of this pain
Comment: 0,0:22:32.20,0:22:39.46,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6931,7223,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}konna itami mo shirazu ni ita
Comment: 1,0:22:32.20,0:22:39.46,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6931,7223,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6910,7260,\1a&HFF&)}I could have lived unaware of this pain
Comment: 1,0:22:32.20,0:22:39.46,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6931,7223,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6910,7260,\1a&HFF&)}konna itami mo shirazu ni ita
Comment: 2,0:22:32.20,0:22:39.46,ED,,0,0,0,,{\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6931,7223,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}I {*\c&H98C4F5&}c{*\c&H95C0F0&}o{*\c&H91BCEB&}u{*\c&H8EB8E6&}l{*\c&H8BB4E1&}d {*\c&H85ABD6&}h{*\c&H82A7D1&}a{*\c&H7EA3CC&}v{*\c&H7B9FC7&}e {\c&H7597BD&}l{*\c&H789BC2&}i{*\c&H7B9FC6&}v{*\c&H7EA2CB&}e{*\c&H81A6D0&}d {*\c&H87AED9&}u{*\c&H8AB2DE&}n{*\c&H8CB5E3&}a{*\c&H8FB9E7&}w{*\c&H92BDEC&}a{*\c&H95C1F1&}r{*\c&H98C4F6&}e {\c&H9ECCFF&}o{*\c&H9BC8FA&}f {*\c&H94BFEE&}t{*\c&H90BAE9&}h{*\c&H8DB6E4&}i{*\c&H8AB2DE&}s {*\c&H83A9D3&}p{*\c&H7FA4CE&}a{*\c&H7CA0C8&}i{*\c&H789BC2&}n{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 2,0:22:32.20,0:22:39.46,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6931,7223,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}k{*\c&H9AC7F8&}o{*\c&H96C1F2&}n{*\c&H92BCEB&}n{*\c&H8EB7E5&}a {*\c&H85ACD7&}i{*\c&H81A7D1&}t{*\c&H7DA2CA&}a{*\c&H799CC4&}m{\c&H7597BD&}i {*\c&H7DA2CA&}m{*\c&H81A7D1&}o {*\c&H8AB2DE&}s{*\c&H8EB7E5&}h{*\c&H92BCEB&}i{*\c&H96C1F2&}r{*\c&H9AC7F8&}a{\c&H9ECCFF&}z{*\c&H99C6F8&}u {*\c&H90BAE9&}n{*\c&H8CB4E2&}i {*\c&H83A9D3&}i{*\c&H7EA3CC&}t{*\c&H7A9DC4&}a{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 10,0:22:36.08,0:22:43.42,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Though we had found a new possibility, the Mud Whale had lost its way and begun to wander yet again. {## this is consistent with the tense shift way up, when Chakuro's running}{and that is exactly what I changed}
Comment: 0,0:22:39.46,0:22:45.55,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(5761,6053,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}But then they came speaking of such beauty
Comment: 0,0:22:39.46,0:22:45.55,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(5761,6053,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}utsukushii kotoba wo tsugeta hito
Comment: 1,0:22:39.46,0:22:45.55,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(5761,6053,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(5761,6053,\1a&HFF&)}But then they came speaking of such beauty
Comment: 1,0:22:39.46,0:22:45.55,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(5761,6053,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(5761,6053,\1a&HFF&)}utsukushii kotoba wo tsugeta hito
Comment: 2,0:22:39.46,0:22:45.55,ED,,0,0,0,,{\c&H9ECCFF&\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(5761,6053,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}B{*\c&H9BC8FA&}u{*\c&H98C4F6&}t {*\c&H92BDEC&}t{*\c&H8FB9E7&}h{*\c&H8CB5E3&}e{*\c&H8AB2DE&}n {*\c&H84AAD5&}t{*\c&H81A6D0&}h{*\c&H7EA2CB&}e{*\c&H7B9FC6&}y {\c&H7597BD&}c{*\c&H789BC2&}a{*\c&H7B9FC6&}m{*\c&H7EA2CB&}e {*\c&H84AAD5&}s{*\c&H87AED9&}p{*\c&H8AB2DE&}e{*\c&H8CB5E3&}a{*\c&H8FB9E7&}k{*\c&H92BDEC&}i{*\c&H95C1F1&}n{*\c&H98C4F6&}g {\c&H9ECCFF&}o{*\c&H9BC8FA&}f {*\c&H95C1F1&}s{*\c&H92BDEC&}u{*\c&H8FB9E7&}c{*\c&H8CB5E3&}h {*\c&H87AED9&}b{*\c&H84AAD5&}e{*\c&H81A6D0&}a{*\c&H7EA2CB&}u{*\c&H7B9FC6&}t{*\c&H789BC2&}y{\c&H7597BD&}
Comment: 2,0:22:39.46,0:22:45.55,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(5761,6053,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}u{*\c&H9AC7F9&}t{*\c&H97C2F3&}s{*\c&H93BEED&}u{*\c&H8FB9E7&}k{*\c&H8BB4E1&}u{*\c&H88AFDB&}s{*\c&H84AAD5&}h{*\c&H80A5CF&}i{*\c&H7CA1C9&}i {\c&H7597BD&}k{*\c&H799CC3&}o{*\c&H7CA1C9&}t{*\c&H80A5CF&}o{*\c&H84AAD5&}b{*\c&H88AFDB&}a {*\c&H8FB9E7&}w{*\c&H93BEED&}o {*\c&H9AC7F9&}t{\c&H9ECCFF&}s{*\c&H9AC7F8&}u{*\c&H96C1F2&}g{*\c&H92BCEB&}e{*\c&H8EB7E5&}t{*\c&H8AB2DE&}a {*\c&H81A7D1&}h{*\c&H7DA2CA&}i{*\c&H799CC4&}t{\c&H7597BD&}o
Dialogue: 10,0:00:17.59,0:00:25.25,Default,,0,0,0,,We now call to order the Ecclesiastical Hearing of former Apathoia Commander-in-Chief Orka. {Ekklesia is now apparently the name of their group}{## what is this announcer voice? while a strictly nominal adjective is admissible in general (see, especially: 'Senate hearing') I dislike the way it looks here for reasons unknown to me. If you want, this could be 'Ekklesiastical', but honestly it looks dumb. 'troop commander' is generic, and could describe any one of a number of ranks or titles, and I'd rather it be particular, so I picked one. If that's not how it sounds to you (being a particular rank or being that rank in particular, either), do revert. '軍団' appears to be 'corps', which is headed by a Lt. General, but since they don't actually use '陸将'... Is '長官' important at all? }{## nevermind, you just use 'Commander-in-Chief' later, so let's roll with that}
Dialogue: 10,0:00:25.71,0:00:29.72,Default,,0,0,0,,With regard to the sinners of Falaina who were exiled to the Great Sand Ocean, {## cf. 'As regards the ...'}
Dialogue: 10,0:00:29.72,0:00:36.39,Default,,0,0,0,,the United Kingdom of Siderasia and the other countries must not be permitted to discover them. {## 'related' seems to suggest 'allied' or kind of otherwise linked (Europeans, or something); is that the case here? If it is, I'd like this to be replaced by 'their allies' or something more specific. 'related countries' is very weak. 'were never to' reads as past tense indicating that it did not ever happen ('I was never to go'), rather than a... prescriptive? 'discover' meanwhile is a little odd just because they're not an unknown entity}{## on second reading, reworked to fit the greater structure better. 'They mustn't be found [so it was reasonable to exterminate them], but they wouldn't have anyway [so it wasn't].'}
Dialogue: 10,0:00:36.39,0:00:40.53,Default,,0,0,0,,That said, the ocean region Falaina was banished to is an evil one.
Dialogue: 10,0:00:40.53,0:00:43.73,Default,,0,0,0,,It rejects approach, discovery, and interference. {## '[even now, in the present, so we're still safe]'}
Dialogue: 10,0:00:44.11,0:00:49.31,Default,,0,0,0,,There was no pressing need for the \NFalaina extermination plan to proceed.
Dialogue: 10,0:00:49.31,0:00:52.19,Default,,0,0,0,,The one who demanded it be carried out immediately... {## this is entirely for English flow}
Dialogue: 10,0:00:52.19,0:00:53.95,Default,,0,0,0,,Was you. {you can't continue someone else's words like this}
Dialogue: 10,0:00:54.53,0:01:02.25,Default,,0,0,0,,To begin with, the exile of ninety-three years ago was meant to be a cautionary tale for our citizens. {## I like not-numerals when they're not used arithmetically}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:02.25,0:01:11.47,Default,,10,10,0,,The sinners' ugly display of strife and conflict would \Ndemonstrate to the people the foolishness of emotions. {## 'emotion' twice is nasty, even if it's in the Japanese}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:11.47,0:01:15.57,Default,,0,0,0,,By that reasoning did you convince us and His Imperial Majesty. {## 'Imperial' isn't necessarily, uh, necessary (see: our only remaining Emperor, Akihito, who prefers just 'His Majesty'), but since we've got a UK kicking around, I want to preserve the distinction}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:15.57,0:01:17.39,Default,,0,0,0,,However, your plan...
Dialogue: 10,0:01:17.39,0:01:19.85,Default,,0,0,0,,Failed.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:20.22,0:01:23.35,Default,,0,0,0,,The Emperor has already passed judgement.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:23.77,0:01:28.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Bearer of ultimate reponsibility for the operation, Apathoia Commander-in-Chief Orka, {## guess I really should just give the whole thing a once over first. semicolons in lists are something I'm fond of, and I personally find just the commas a little weird here, but this is up to you}{we don't do semicolons in subs}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:28.69,0:01:34.25,Default,,0,0,0,,Skylos Commander Araphne, and the hundred names undermentioned are hereby sentenced to death. {## by the way, this guy is totally 'Arachne', but it's not worth doing until batch. General is a specific military term and not appropriate here, so I went with what we were using before (in vacuum, might go for something like 'Captain', just for being in charge of the ship, rather than a rank per se)}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:36.34,0:01:37.41,Default,,0,0,0,,And you think...
Dialogue: 10,0:01:38.89,0:01:42.91,Default,,0,0,0,,this is how you write the greatest of tales? {## 'greatest of tales' is so, so weird in English. If you want to revert, change 'would' to 'will', and 'that' to 'this'}{more accurate and thematic}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:45.75,0:01:47.00,Default,,0,0,0,,What is so funny?!
Dialogue: 10,0:01:47.00,0:01:47.87,Default,,0,0,0,,Pardon me. {## it -really- looks like he's just shedding here, but on closer inspection i think I can see it still connected}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:49.65,0:01:53.59,Default,,0,0,0,,I simply thought you were shortsighted.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:53.59,0:01:54.63,Default,,0,0,0,,What?!
Dialogue: 10,0:01:54.63,0:01:57.80,Default,,0,0,0,,Pay his provocations no mind! {## while this is a viable reading if we consider it a forewarning, what comes next isn't really a 'provocation', and only the preceding was. But the preceding by itself wouldn't sway anybody. Accordingly,}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:56.59,0:01:57.80,Default - Alt,,0,0,0,,Long ago!
Dialogue: 10,0:01:58.38,0:02:03.98,Default,,0,0,0,,Heaven tore off a piece of its body and scattered it down upon the land. {down because image of rain}
Dialogue: 10,0:02:03.98,0:02:08.45,Default,,0,0,0,,With it came the extinction of ancient and evil culture.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:08.45,0:02:12.48,Default,,0,0,0,,We refer to this event as the Rain of Katharterio. {purgatory in Greek, I did my best}{## don't feel bad, I fuck this up all the time. καθαρτήριο = katharterio}
Dialogue: 10,0:02:12.92,0:02:16.99,Default,,0,0,0,,In that case, what does that make us?
Dialogue: 10,0:02:18.50,0:02:23.58,Default,,0,0,0,,After the world was purified, we sang praises to the nous, the body of God,
Dialogue: 10,0:02:23.58,0:02:30.38,Default,,0,0,0,,and decided to offer the source of our past mistakes, our hearts, to them in exchange for their power.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:30.38,0:02:35.64,Default,,0,0,0,,At that moment, two species of man were born. {## 'thenceforth' is a continuative; you have a choice here between 'two races were born', and 'all people who were born belonged to one of two races', and the former is a single event, and the latter a continuative. I'm going to roll with the former. For reference, the latter'd be something like 'Thenceforth, all men (gender neutral 'man') were born as one of two types.'}{race is incorrect}
Dialogue: 10,0:02:36.55,0:02:40.48,Default,,0,0,0,,Those who are the angels of the nous, \Nand those who are not.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:40.48,0:02:44.47,Default,,0,0,0,,We call those who are angels Marked, and those who are not Unmarked.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:45.17,0:02:50.31,Default,,0,0,0,,Now then, perhaps you have all forgotten the next part of the story.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:50.31,0:02:53.19,Default,,0,0,0,,The fact that there is a third type of human.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:53.59,0:02:55.04,Default,,0,0,0,,A third?
Dialogue: 10,0:02:55.60,0:02:56.94,Default,,0,0,0,,The daimons.
Dialogue: 10,0:02:57.92,0:03:02.16,Default,,0,0,0,,The strongest of warriors, \Ncreated by the power of the nous. {## forces (strongest of warriors) (created by nous) grouping, rather than (strongest of (warriors created by nous))}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:02.16,0:03:04.41,Default,,0,0,0,,Daimons are naught more than legends.
Dialogue: 10,0:03:04.85,0:03:09.42,Default,,0,0,0,,We have been made to forget them by the past! {## apart from being sort of clunky, the original groups (them as a product of the past) and needs to be reworked if you revert this}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:09.42,0:03:12.45,Default,,0,0,0,,But we can no longer avert our eyes from the truth!
Dialogue: 10,0:03:12.97,0:03:18.13,Default,,0,0,0,,The boy from Falaina who destroyed Skylos was himself a daimon! {## 'shouneN'}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:18.91,0:03:21.66,Default,,0,0,0,,I will declare it so there can be no doubt! {## the thing is that he's never declared this, and it's more of a rephrasal}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:21.66,0:03:25.01,Default,,0,0,0,,The daimons are a threat to the Empire! {## DAIMONES DELENDA EST}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:26.12,0:03:32.15,Default,,0,0,0,,They are incarnations of sin with the power to capsize the ark of our nation! {## i'll maintain the 'nation -as- ark' thing, not 'nation -on- ark'}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:32.47,0:03:35.96,Default,,0,0,0,,With a being like that right before his eyes...
Dialogue: 10,0:03:35.96,0:03:37.09,Default,,0,0,0,,Araphne!
Dialogue: 10,0:03:38.10,0:03:40.56,Default,,0,0,0,,How did you treat him?
Dialogue: 10,0:03:40.56,0:03:46.95,Default,,0,0,0,,According to the records, you underestimated, insulted, and provoked him.
Dialogue: 10,0:03:48.11,0:03:48.79,Default,,0,0,0,,I only— {## this reads better, for whatever reason}
Dialogue: 10,0:03:48.79,0:03:52.00,Default,,0,0,0,,I won't allow you to claim innocence.
Dialogue: 10,0:03:52.00,0:03:55.17,Default,,0,0,0,,Rather, under the weight of your own sins—
Dialogue: 10,0:03:55.50,0:03:56.13,Default,,0,0,0,,Shit!
Dialogue: 10,0:04:11.15,0:04:13.81,Default,,0,0,0,,W-Wait! Orka drew his weapon first!
Dialogue: 10,0:04:14.25,0:04:15.06,Default,,0,0,0,,Weapon?
Dialogue: 10,0:04:15.85,0:04:17.65,Default,,0,0,0,,The records are drenched in blood.
Dialogue: 10,0:04:18.21,0:04:24.07,Default,,0,0,0,,Remind me who it was who appointed a man with no control over his emotions to this mission.
Dialogue: 10,0:04:24.45,0:04:26.15,Default,,0,0,0,,It was you. {## 'Right' has a tone that sort of conflicts}
Dialogue: 10,0:04:26.15,0:04:32.04,Default,,10,10,0,,Please do try to remember that you all hold responsibility for the nous sinking, even if you weren't on the field. {## I had to cut 'sinking a nous' to get this to two lines, but it's not important anyway. 'all' is here to reinforce the plural, which weakens with every instance of 'you'}
Dialogue: 10,0:04:32.79,0:04:37.24,Default,,0,0,0,,Now then, I suppose it is about time to unbind the new chapter of this story. {## for flow, as well as to catch 'sorosoro'. 'sorosoro''s in there for flow in the Japanese, and so these reasons are related. I don't know how I feel about 'unbind'. I do like keeping flavour like that, but it's a bit unnatural}
Dialogue: 10,0:04:37.24,0:04:38.50,Default,,0,0,0,,New chapter, you say?
Dialogue: 10,0:04:38.99,0:04:44.94,Default,,0,0,0,,In the near future, there is a possibility a second Rain of Katharterio will fall.
Dialogue: 10,0:04:45.48,0:04:47.47,Default,,0,0,0,,Are you trying to distract us?
Dialogue: 10,0:04:48.26,0:04:50.43,Default,,0,0,0,,You have no sense of danger.
Dialogue: 10,0:04:51.32,0:04:55.76,Default,,0,0,0,,The world must be washed \Nonce again to return to purity. {## inversion of this sentence makes it fit much better with the following, since it's a stronger implication that it -will- happen}
Dialogue: 10,0:04:55.76,0:05:00.11,Default,,0,0,0,,When that time comes, we must be able to protect the ark of our nation. {## this is minor, but i want it to be consistent with the line above. it also avoids duplication following}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:00.86,0:05:04.56,Default,,0,0,0,,Our country must gain control of the daimons.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:04.56,0:05:06.84,Default,,0,0,0,,Control the daimons?
Dialogue: 10,0:05:06.84,0:05:09.66,Default,,0,0,0,,Was it not you who said Falaina must be destroyed in its entirety?
Dialogue: 10,0:05:10.27,0:05:14.75,Default,,0,0,0,,Then who... who would have to kill the daimons? {## forgive me my arrogance if I'm wrong, but isn't this more like 'And who would be willing to take on the elimination of the daimons?' It seems to make more sense with the following lines. i.e. attempting to kill daimons is risky, and who would be willing to try it?. throw 'And who... Who' at the beginning if you like. mind that 'will' is here for the later lines; otherwise, 'would' would be favoured}{something interesting happened here that I can't fully explain}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:18.09,0:05:23.53,Default,,0,0,0,,If a daimon destroys another nous, \Nwill the person in charge be executed? {## this is plural, but the English probably works better in singular}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:23.53,0:05:25.36,Default,,0,0,0,,Will you pretend it never happened?
Dialogue: 10,0:05:25.36,0:05:26.82,Default,,0,0,0,,Silence!
Dialogue: 10,0:05:26.82,0:05:34.52,Default,,10,10,0,,Just join the sunken ruins beneath the sea, as your destruction is the only conclusion your rusted minds can reach! {## I have no idea what this sentence means, English or Japanese. 'Make like the sunken ancient ruins, and (use your rusted minds to follow the story of your own destruction to the end)'? It doesn't follow, in either case, that he would randomly shout this out, so I'm just going to give up and fudge the English into making sense}{Orka speaks about everything as if it were a story}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:37.04,0:05:39.36,Default,,0,0,0,,What are you saying you can do differently?
Dialogue: 10,0:05:39.97,0:05:42.11,Default,,0,0,0,,I will capture the daimons.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:46.46,0:05:48.70,Default,,0,0,0,,Only I can do it. {this was a deliberate choice, as it's what he meant}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:49.13,0:05:52.41,Default,,0,0,0,,Daimons have the power to overwrite the rules of the world.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:52.41,0:05:56.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Harnessing their existence will lead to our becoming its supreme rulers. {## 'their existence' reads very much as a hypothetical ('the Higgs boson's existence' (a few years ago, anyway)). the awkward second half was originally 'us to supreme rule over the world' but I had to dodge 'world' again. 'its' at least attaches properly, because 'daimons' and 'rules' are all in plural}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:57.44,0:05:58.98,Default,,0,0,0,,Isn't that right?
Dialogue: 10,0:06:04.63,0:06:07.40,Default,,0,0,0,,Let us forgive him for everything \Nbefore his meeting the daimon. {## 'meeting' is OK, but 'his meeting' is a bit clearer}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:07.97,0:06:09.89,Default,,0,0,0,,The blame lies in his actions after. {## nice TL}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:10.20,0:06:13.85,Default,,0,0,0,,And those were all done at \NSkylos Commander Araphne's sole discretion. {## floe}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:14.67,0:06:17.99,Default,,0,0,0,,Very well. Deal with your own \Nsubordinates as you see appropriate. {## 'take responsibility' (apart from, uh, the obvious connotations) reads as a reprimand, which it isn't here}{too long}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:17.99,0:06:18.94,Default,,0,0,0,,W-Wait!
Dialogue: 10,0:06:19.22,0:06:21.75,Default,,0,0,0,,Orka, you bastard!
Dialogue: 10,0:06:21.75,0:06:23.90,Default,,0,0,0,,Orka!
Dialogue: 10,0:06:24.25,0:06:28.11,Default,,0,0,0,,May the servants of the nous be blessed by divine grace.  {## while 'with' is fine in general ('blessed with healthy children', or something), because of what 'divine grace' is, this reads as 'may we be graceful af'. If this sentence actually does imply that, revert}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:46.04,0:06:51.22,Default,,0,0,0,,Pardon me, current Apathoia Commander-in-Chief Atsali. {## ατσάλι, 'steel'}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:52.18,0:06:58.61,Default,,0,0,0,,Just because you survived the hearing does not mean your blunder has been erased. {## is there a filter on this dude's voice?}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:58.61,0:07:03.23,Default,,0,0,0,,I am well aware. But there's no point \Npretending to be repentant in front of you. {## uh, TLC? isn't this 'At the same time, I can't help but try to keep up appearances in front of you.', or the like? It doesn't really follow from the prior line otherwise. changed with the object of 'but i'm trying to make it seem like it has'}{Orka has to act sorry in front of others, but Atsali can see right through that so he doesn't even bother}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:03.68,0:07:06.62,Default,,0,0,0,,Allow me to skip the formalities.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:06.62,0:07:09.99,Default,,0,0,0,,I wish to make use of warship Karcharias. {couldn't find a reference for this name}{## it's Karcharias from Episode 7. read boring ass Greek romanization notes if you want to find out why}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:10.48,0:07:13.37,Default,,0,0,0,,Despite having lost Skylos just recently? {## i, uh, BANE?}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:13.84,0:07:19.16,Default,,0,0,0,,If the Commander gives his permission, the committee will be unable to object.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:22.90,0:07:23.88,Default,,0,0,0,,Yes? {"Problem?"}{## is joletb QCing this week?}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:24.32,0:07:29.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Do you remember the first thing you said to me?
Dialogue: 10,0:07:29.01,0:07:30.13,Default,,0,0,0,,I've long since forgotten.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:30.91,0:07:36.10,Default,,0,0,0,,I am not requesting an immediate answer. A few days' delay will do me no harm.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:37.25,0:07:39.60,Default,,0,0,0,,I anticipate a favorable response.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:44.49,0:07:47.13,Default,,0,0,0,,What did you two discuss? {## only to make my next edit passable}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:48.96,0:07:50.71,Default,,0,0,0,,We spoke of dreams. {ep title}{## i was actually thinking about this last episode, but since it's always a crapshoot didn't bother mentioning it. I get a feeling that this isn't 'story' or anything like that, but just the nominal of 'hanasu' (and I think those are slightly different), and I don't think this is a particular dream, or if it is that its particularity is important, but rather 'Dreams' as a whole being used as the modifier. so, like 'dream talk'. 'a story from a dream' is also pretty specific, and from our perspective that conversation doesn't seem like that at all. but 'talk of dreams' widens the scope enough that it's maybe passable. but of course it's a crapshoot and this is up to you. just my 2c}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:53.45,0:07:56.05,Default,,0,0,0,,The Marked all saw the same dream? {or had, if you want to appease that one guy}{## i was thinking about replying to that guy, but honestly my thoughts aren't ordered and I could go either way. the arguments I have in favour of 'saw' (apart from that it's literally 'miru') are some vague feelings along the lines of implying 'vision' in addition to dream, since it's a bit extra}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:56.05,0:07:57.16,Default,,0,0,0,,That's right.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:57.47,0:08:01.16,Default,,0,0,0,,A dream where a girl entered our ears and sang a song.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:01.16,0:08:05.49,Default,,0,0,0,,I wonder what it means.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:05.49,0:08:11.38,Default,,0,0,0,,Moreover, it's rather difficult for us Unmarked to understand given that we didn't have that dream.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:11.91,0:08:15.47,Default,,0,0,0,,Don't worry! I think we'll be able to do it.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:52.90,0:09:05.14,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Please come and find us
Dialogue: 10,0:09:03.15,0:09:05.14,Default - Alt,,0,0,0,,The Mud Whale is making headway!
Dialogue: 10,0:09:06.07,0:09:07.61,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Living beings are strange.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:08.51,0:09:12.57,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Even though nobody taught the star locusts how,
Dialogue: 10,0:09:12.57,0:09:15.35,Default - th,,0,0,0,,they all flash their lights at the same rhythm. {## orig. is single locusts can keep time}
Dialogue: 10,0:09:16.05,0:09:19.95,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Migratory birds know where to go from the time of their birth.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:20.58,0:09:22.43,Default - th,,0,0,0,,We're the same.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:23.08,0:09:25.87,Default - th,,0,0,0,,We already knew.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:26.77,0:09:28.87,Default - th,,0,0,0,,The way to move the Mud Whale.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:31.57,0:09:34.60,Default,,0,0,0,,Their playing around is enough to move it...
Dialogue: 10,0:09:34.60,0:09:37.05,Default,,0,0,0,,My, how very like this island. {## 'man' is just too weird for me next to 'how very like'}
Dialogue: 10,0:09:39.98,0:09:44.18,Default,,0,0,0,,It's quite a spectacle to see every inhabitant assembled.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:44.18,0:09:45.41,Default,,0,0,0,,Rochalito-sama.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:46.00,0:09:50.08,Default,,0,0,0,,Have you noticed that the proportion of youngsters is rather too high? {## softens the statement, in line with 'have you noticed'}
Dialogue: 10,0:09:54.40,0:09:57.51,Default,,0,0,0,,You look down. Did you not get the dream? {this covers both bases of "did you not have the dream" and "did you not understand the dream"}{## is 'not have the dream' really a viable reading of 'yume ga fushigi'? why?}
Dialogue: 10,0:09:58.22,0:10:00.79,Default,,0,0,0,,Or are you bothered by the guests?
Dialogue: 10,0:10:02.73,0:10:05.35,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm scared of things I don't understand too. {## i'm a fan of super explicit feelings exposition when it's a cute girl show, but not like this}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:05.35,0:10:10.29,Default,,0,0,0,,First we got visitors, and then we had that dream and learned what Kokalo is.
Dialogue: 10,0:10:11.08,0:10:13.57,Default,,0,0,0,,I get the feeling someone brought those things together.
Dialogue: 10,0:10:19.32,0:10:22.64,Default,,0,0,0,,This is where we truly set off. {## I just don't like 'departure' because of its connotations}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:25.96,0:10:26.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah.
Dialogue: 10,0:10:28.67,0:10:33.98,Default,,0,0,0,,It's a bit lonely for us seeing that only the Marked know how to do it. {## since this is a statement about the Unmarked in general}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:34.92,0:10:38.95,Default,,0,0,0,,But now the Mud Whale can go wherever it wants.
Dialogue: 10,0:10:40.20,0:10:44.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Anywhere, even beyond the reach of the Empire's fangs.
Dialogue: 10,0:10:52.83,0:10:55.84,Default,,0,0,0,,Was this island ravaged by an epidemic? {## 'plagued' is itself too semantically close to 'epidemic' and also has a connotation of a chronic situation, not a once off. alt. 'hit', whatever you want}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:57.01,0:11:01.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Or perhaps the Empire's attack killed all the adults?
Dialogue: 10,0:11:02.28,0:11:03.80,Default,,0,0,0,,It is as I told you before.
Dialogue: 10,0:11:04.34,0:11:09.54,Default,,0,0,0,,Because the Marked are short-lived, \Nthere is an abundance of young people. {## 'because ... it results' NG. alt. 'The Marked being short-lived results ...'}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:10.14,0:11:14.34,Default,,0,0,0,,The Imperial soldiers use the same power as the people of your island.
Dialogue: 10,0:11:14.34,0:11:18.96,Default,,0,0,0,,Despite that, I've never even heard of a civilization as short-lived as yours. {## these mud savages don't constitute a civilization. back on topic, while he does say 'hoka', it doesn't really work out in the English. I don't know if that's because Japanese has a different parsing, but blah blah i'm tired. also, isn't this 'heard of'? alt. something like 'but they aren't as short-lived as you', mostly for the English}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:18.96,0:11:21.71,Default,,0,0,0,,Just what are the people of this island?
Dialogue: 10,0:11:23.09,0:11:24.49,Default,,0,0,0,,I do not know.
Dialogue: 10,0:11:24.49,0:11:27.66,Default,,0,0,0,,Don't feign ignorance, you ape! Do you intend to deceive me?
Dialogue: 10,0:11:27.66,0:11:29.33,Default,,0,0,0,,It's the truth!
Dialogue: 10,0:11:29.33,0:11:33.33,Default,,0,0,0,,If I knew, I wouldn't be trying to create medicine to extend their lifespans! {## this is the most referenced, and least important, thing in the whole series}{you mean most important. the mystery of their lifespans is central to their conflict and lack of knowledge}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:37.75,0:11:40.16,Default,,0,0,0,,Take me to your room.
Dialogue: 10,0:11:40.16,0:11:40.93,Default,,0,0,0,,Huh?
Dialogue: 10,0:11:40.93,0:11:44.57,Default,,0,0,0,,Follow me at once! I will show you the world. {## I don't like 'come' just because Suou's ostensibly in the lead. it's meant as 'come [to where i am and start guiding me]' but reads more as 'come [to your room]'}{I'm surprised you didn't comment on Aladdin}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:55.47,0:11:58.82,Default,,0,0,0,,This is the sea chart my ship uses.
Dialogue: 10,0:11:59.81,0:12:00.82,Default,,0,0,0,,Sea chart?
Dialogue: 10,0:12:00.82,0:12:04.09,Default,,0,0,0,,A map that shows the layout of the ocean.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:04.09,0:12:06.17,Default,,0,0,0,,I don't quite understand... {## 'fathom' is... a different understand than 'understand' understand. too many words to elaborate}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:06.70,0:12:10.07,Default,,0,0,0,,You really are all ignorant apes.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:10.07,0:12:10.96,Default,,0,0,0,,Listen up. {## looking closely doesn't help, because they don't know how to read a map. they need to listen closely to the explanation. Alt. actually 'Listen closely.'}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:11.31,0:12:16.12,Default,,0,0,0,,This is the United Kingdom of Siderasia, home to the House of Amonlogia. {## as the mud whale guys don't really know what the UK is; if they did, 'here''d be fine. TLC: can you take a close look at 'zoku suru' here? my understanding so far has been that Amonlogia's a constituent state of Siderasia (a la England of the UK), and it doesn't make sense to say e.g. the United Kingdom of Great Britain under the control of England, barring snarky political stuff. There are no other references to 'Amonlogia' as a family or house name, also}{good enough}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:16.12,0:12:20.71,Default,,0,0,0,,My ship traveled westward over the Sand Ocean.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:21.78,0:12:27.65,Default,,0,0,0,,And this is where we were nearly \Nshipwrecked by a bizarre current. {## side effect of the change two lines up}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:27.65,0:12:32.48,Default,,0,0,0,,After making our way through, we finally arrived at this island a few days later.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:33.48,0:12:35.61,Default,,0,0,0,,So this is where the Mud Whale is!
Dialogue: 10,0:12:35.61,0:12:37.31,Default,,0,0,0,,Hey, Suou! Give that back! {cutting off the rest because it doesn't matter}{## maybe you'd consider Suou's scream, just because it interrupts, but yeah}{you don't sub screams anyway}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:37.31,0:12:43.45,Default,,10,10,0,,From this, we can presume that this rudderless island has been wandering the same region due to the current. {## I thought so hard about that 'helm'/'rudder' shit last episode but 'helm' is entirely untenable in this context, so I guess I'm giving up}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:46.56,0:12:47.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Precisely!
Dialogue: 10,0:12:47.53,0:12:50.91,Default,,0,0,0,,It was known as an unapproachable evil region up until now,
Dialogue: 10,0:12:50.91,0:12:56.40,Default,,0,0,0,,but I endeavored to overcome the dangers at sea to finally discover this island! {## 'endeavoured'}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:56.40,0:12:57.88,Default,,0,0,0,,I see.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:57.88,0:13:03.43,Default,,0,0,0,,Only Imperial ships were able to cross the ocean current before this.
Dialogue: 10,0:13:03.43,0:13:07.79,Default,,0,0,0,,That's also why the rudderless Mud Whale was unable to go anywhere else. {## without 'also', 'that' attaches to the entirety of the 'Only Imperial ...' bit and it doesn't make sense}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:07.79,0:13:08.93,Default,,0,0,0,,Like a caged bird...
Dialogue: 10,0:13:10.42,0:13:14.63,Default,,0,0,0,,This part of the ocean acted as a natural prison. {## they've sort of known for a while that the ocean in its entirety was. anyway, this is just for flow. also, i'd probably run 'The ocean', but that walks even further into the above issue}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:15.98,0:13:20.69,Default,,0,0,0,,The ones who attacked you are our country's greatest enemy.
Dialogue: 10,0:13:22.69,0:13:28.40,Default,,0,0,0,,Come under our wing, and we will protect you weak, caged fledglings. {## this wing - fledgling - bird thing is good stuff}{I've done this before}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:28.40,0:13:29.70,Default,,0,0,0,,Rochalito!
Dialogue: 10,0:13:29.70,0:13:36.05,Default,,0,0,0,,The nation we oppose is a strange one further west in the seas that bears no name of its own. {## to explicitly link this as the Empire, and not just some random other one}{it's definitely in, they're on an ark. of implies a landmass to me}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:36.05,0:13:37.21,Default,,0,0,0,,It has no name?
Dialogue: 10,0:13:37.64,0:13:43.73,Default,,0,0,0,,Though I don't know the reason, it seems that not even its citizens have real names. {## don't like 'even ... either'}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:44.84,0:13:48.84,Default,,0,0,0,,This island is currently heading towards Amonlogia in the east.
Dialogue: 10,0:13:48.84,0:13:52.85,Default,,0,0,0,,Now that it has a rudder, it should be able to escape the currents.
Dialogue: 10,0:13:54.68,0:13:56.46,Default,,0,0,0,,And beyond those... {##  currents plural}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:59.21,0:14:02.69,Default,,0,0,0,,is a world the likes of which you have never seen.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:26.99,0:14:29.80,Default,,0,0,0,,What did you need from me this late at night?
Dialogue: 10,0:14:31.52,0:14:32.97,Default,,0,0,0,,I have a request.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:32.97,0:14:35.68,Default,,0,0,0,,I knew from the moment I first saw you.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:36.14,0:14:38.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Your skin color is different from the others of this island. {wow, it only takes 93 years to whitewash an entire race of people?}{## i think i mentioned this before, but 'than' is the most common by far, 'than' is chiefly American, and 'to' is chiefly British, but whatever this is pretty nitpicky}{## maybe they just removed cracker to begin with}
Dialogue: 10,0:14:38.91,0:14:41.50,Default,,0,0,0,,You come from that other country.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:43.73,0:14:46.97,Default,,0,0,0,,What do you need? Speak freely.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:47.49,0:14:50.45,Default,,0,0,0,,Stop trying to discover more about the people of this island.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:51.40,0:14:52.62,Default,,0,0,0,,And why should I?
Dialogue: 10,0:14:52.98,0:14:57.12,Default,,0,0,0,,Do not ask about the people until we reach your country.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:57.12,0:14:59.42,Default,,0,0,0,,No, I refuse.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:00.00,0:15:05.45,Default,,0,0,0,,Do you think we'll just accept some unknown \Nrace of people who are mysteriously short-lived? {## country country country}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:05.45,0:15:07.70,Default,,0,0,0,,It could be due to a contagious disease.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:07.70,0:15:08.76,Default,,0,0,0,,It's not.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:10.01,0:15:12.34,Default,,0,0,0,,You know the reason behind it, do you? {## a plain statement is weird}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:21.59,0:15:22.83,Default,,0,0,0,,Lykos?
Dialogue: 10,0:15:23.93,0:15:29.57,Default,,0,0,0,,Unless I know everything about these people, \NI cannot guarantee we will accept them as allies.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:29.57,0:15:32.05,Default,,0,0,0,,It's caused by the Mud Whale.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:32.05,0:15:35.41,Default,,0,0,0,,The Mud Whale... This ship?
Dialogue: 10,0:15:38.16,0:15:42.96,Default,,0,0,0,,This ship and the ships of the Empire are kept afloat by living beings called nous. {## 'the' implies Rochalito knows about them, which he doesn't (?)}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:45.00,0:15:51.76,Default,,0,0,0,,My country's nous eat emotions, and in return they grant the power of thymia.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:51.76,0:15:54.26,Default,,0,0,0,,This produces those known as the Marked. {## orig. 'Those' has no referent}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:54.63,0:15:58.70,Default,,0,0,0,,But this island's nous, Falaina, alone has a different role. {## this is a pretty important detail}{these commas are pretty shitty, but neither way is good}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:58.70,0:16:00.68,Default,,0,0,0,,Different? What do you mean?
Dialogue: 10,0:16:01.19,0:16:01.78,Default,,0,0,0,,Lykos—
Dialogue: 10,0:16:01.78,0:16:08.15,Default,,0,0,0,,What Falaina eats in order to grant thymia and keep this island afloat... {## reworked this whole big because 'are those who live on the Mud Whale: the life force of the Marked' implies that the life force is what lives on the Mud Whale}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:10.88,0:16:12.28,Default,,0,0,0,,from the people on the Mud Whale...
Dialogue: 10,0:16:15.13,0:16:16.74,Default,,0,0,0,,is the life force of the Marked.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:28.59,0:16:29.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Chakuro?! {## this isn't really that surprising, my dude. it's not really anything that's immediately terrifying, either?}{I mean he literally explains in like half a minute}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:30.17,0:16:31.83,Default,,0,0,0,,Wait, Chakuro!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:32.55,0:16:34.09,Default,,0,0,0,,How unpleasant.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:34.09,0:16:40.11,Default,,0,0,0,,Between learning something painful and living in ignorance of that pain,
Dialogue: 10,0:16:40.77,0:16:42.64,Default,,0,0,0,,both options are difficult. {## so, while 'choices' is fine in general like this ('You have three choices') to denote options, because they're described as 'difficult', the 'choices' here parse instead as 'decisions'}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:46.40,0:16:48.27,Default - th,,0,0,0,,I already had a suspicion. {not the case}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:50.63,0:16:52.19,Default - th,,0,0,0,,But I pretended not to see.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:53.56,0:16:55.13,Default - th,,0,0,0,,I didn't want to know.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:55.94,0:16:57.70,Default - th,,0,0,0,,That's why I avoided it.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:58.14,0:16:59.13,Default - th,,0,0,0,,All this time.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:59.91,0:17:00.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Lykos.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:01.79,0:17:06.01,Default,,0,0,0,,We have been prepared since the day you arrived here.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:06.54,0:17:07.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Even so...
Dialogue: 10,0:17:07.76,0:17:11.22,Default,,0,0,0,,We didn't want to let it become known.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:11.22,0:17:13.80,Default,,0,0,0,,So the Council was aware the entire time.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:14.82,0:17:18.13,Default,,0,0,0,,Please forgive us, Suou, and everyone else too.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:21.28,0:17:22.20,Default,,0,0,0,,Not at all. {## contrastive}
Dialogue: 10,0:17:22.80,0:17:25.89,Default,,0,0,0,,This does not change my duty to support the Marked.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:27.27,0:17:28.36,Default,,0,0,0,,It's not that simple.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:29.78,0:17:32.73,Default,,0,0,0,,Once they go out into a different land, they'll realize it themselves.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:34.93,0:17:38.95,Default,,0,0,0,,Or perhaps you will keep them contained in Falaina's cage.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:44.49,0:17:45.71,Default,,0,0,0,,Hey, what's with this?
Dialogue: 10,0:17:45.71,0:17:47.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Hurry up and start.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:49.90,0:17:52.63,Default,,0,0,0,,Why are they calling a meeting like this?
Dialogue: 10,0:17:52.63,0:17:55.67,Default,,0,0,0,,Aren't those twins just a couple of bowel mole punks?
Dialogue: 10,0:17:59.24,0:18:02.47,Default,,0,0,0,,We made this from birds we took down with thymia.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:02.47,0:18:05.98,Default,,0,0,0,,It's a flag that we've taken an oath on!
Dialogue: 10,0:18:05.98,0:18:13.27,Default,,0,0,0,,Under the banner of the Purple Wing, we declare ourselves the new leaders of the Mud Whale!
Dialogue: 10,0:18:13.27,0:18:14.99,Default,,0,0,0,,This is a call to action!
Dialogue: 10,0:18:15.83,0:18:19.20,Default,,0,0,0,,We know that none of you trust us.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:19.20,0:18:24.03,Default,,0,0,0,,But we also don't care about getting every single one of your approvals. {## mind typo}
Dialogue: 10,0:18:24.03,0:18:33.25,Default,,10,10,0,,We've always been unsure of what to do, seeing how you all live like puppets without a single doubt about the world.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:33.25,0:18:39.51,Default,,0,0,0,,We've stuck to the corners of the Mud Whale up to now because we couldn't clear that uncertainty.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:40.04,0:18:47.10,Default,,0,0,0,,Does even a single one of you {\i1}really{\i0} feel like this island is taking us to freedom?
Dialogue: 10,0:18:47.55,0:18:52.27,Default,,0,0,0,,I heard that the Mud Whale is heading to the country of the people who boarded us.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:52.66,0:18:54.28,Default,,0,0,0,,Just who decided that?!
Dialogue: 10,0:18:54.28,0:18:55.78,Default,,0,0,0,,Wasn't you, was it?
Dialogue: 10,0:18:55.78,0:19:00.61,Default,,0,0,0,,Of course not! The Unmarked Council of Elders makes decisions about the island.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:00.61,0:19:04.21,Default,,0,0,0,,That's right! That's how it's been since before we were born.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:04.21,0:19:07.46,Default,,0,0,0,,And you all think that's correct.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:07.46,0:19:09.00,Default,,0,0,0,,What's wrong with that?
Dialogue: 10,0:19:09.00,0:19:11.27,Default,,0,0,0,,I'll change the question.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:11.27,0:19:15.38,Default,,0,0,0,,How many Marked do you think died in the battle we just fought?
Dialogue: 10,0:19:15.38,0:19:18.33,Default,,0,0,0,,I-I don't want to remember.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:18.33,0:19:21.89,Default,,0,0,0,,Why would you bring that up now?!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:21.89,0:19:24.35,Default,,0,0,0,,Because so many died that you don't want to remember!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:25.59,0:19:30.39,Default,,0,0,0,,The only Unmarked that died in the Skylos attack was Hakuji from the Council. {## 'the Skylos attack' or 'Skylos' attack', since we're not prefacing 'Skylos' with the article}
Dialogue: 10,0:19:30.39,0:19:31.81,Default,,0,0,0,,Just one person!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:31.81,0:19:35.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Try thinking back on what the Council's plan was!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:36.12,0:19:39.07,Default,,0,0,0,,They had us Marked train to fight.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:39.07,0:19:42.67,Default,,0,0,0,,Meanwhile, the Unmarked hid in a safe place on the Mud Whale.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:42.67,0:19:47.16,Default,,0,0,0,,What other choice was there? The Unmarked can't even fight because they don't have thymia! {## I don't read this as 'What choice did -we- have but to follow it', but rather as 'What choice did -they- have but to make it', but it's ambiguous. Dodged the issue entirely}
Dialogue: 10,0:19:47.16,0:19:47.82,Default,,0,0,0,,That's right!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:47.82,0:19:50.99,Default,,0,0,0,,It's crazier for us to try and fight while protecting the Unmarked!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:50.99,0:19:54.13,Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah, they'd just hold us back.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:54.13,0:19:57.29,Default,,0,0,0,,Exactly! The Unmarked always hold us back!
Dialogue: 10,0:19:57.84,0:20:00.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Don't you think they're cowards?
Dialogue: 10,0:20:00.01,0:20:04.00,Default,,0,0,0,,They can't use thymia or do anything for themselves.
Dialogue: 10,0:20:04.00,0:20:06.47,Default,,0,0,0,,They're just parasites with long lives.
Dialogue: 10,0:20:07.48,0:20:11.16,Default,,0,0,0,,And those parasites made a plan that benefits only them.
Dialogue: 10,0:20:11.16,0:20:15.61,Default,,0,0,0,,Are we disposable pawns, only good for being sent to the slaughter?{## unless you really want 'rags' for some reason; it's pretty weird}
Dialogue: 10,0:20:18.07,0:20:20.78,Default,,0,0,0,,You didn't question it even once?! {## is that a female Ouni}{cute}
Dialogue: 10,0:20:20.78,0:20:25.49,Default,,0,0,0,,Get it through your heads that the "order" of the Mud Whale is a corrupt delusion!
Dialogue: 10,0:20:25.91,0:20:29.20,Default,,0,0,0,,We will free the Marked from the tyranny of the Unmarked!{gonna be honest, I was looking for this word}
Dialogue: 10,0:20:29.63,0:20:31.96,Default,,0,0,0,,We will decide for ourselves where to go! {## mind typo, dodging 'Marked'}
Dialogue: 10,0:20:32.47,0:20:38.44,Default,,0,0,0,,We Marked of the Purple Wing Helm will hold all the power on this ship! {## 'will' consistency}
Dialogue: 10,0:20:39.30,0:20:42.17,Default,,0,0,0,,Thymia is the force that moves the Mud Whale! {## dupe}{yeah, so, that shit's intentional fyi}
Dialogue: 10,0:20:42.17,0:20:45.55,Default,,0,0,0,,The strength of our thymia will determine the Mud Whale's course!
Dialogue: 10,0:20:45.55,0:20:47.55,Default,,0,0,0,,Power will be everything!
Dialogue: 10,0:20:49.93,0:20:52.07,Default,,0,0,0,,We'll control the Mud Whale?
Dialogue: 10,0:20:52.07,0:20:54.24,Default,,0,0,0,,Are you telling us to defy the Council?
Dialogue: 10,0:20:54.24,0:20:55.70,Default,,0,0,0,,What's wrong with that?!
Dialogue: 10,0:20:55.70,0:20:58.82,Default,,0,0,0,,Stop it! Using thymia for violence is against the rules!
Dialogue: 10,0:20:59.54,0:21:02.22,Default,,0,0,0,,That's just something the Unmarked decided.
Dialogue: 10,0:21:11.23,0:21:12.25,Default,,0,0,0,,Ouni!
Dialogue: 10,0:21:13.16,0:21:15.55,Default,,0,0,0,,Don't resort to meaningless violence.
Dialogue: 10,0:21:15.55,0:21:18.24,Default,,0,0,0,,You really are a lapdog of the Unmarked now. {## stress shifting}
Dialogue: 10,0:21:18.73,0:21:23.22,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm not on anybody's side. It's just that you were bowel moles too.
Dialogue: 10,0:21:23.85,0:21:25.82,Default,,0,0,0,,I don't want to see you acting like this. {sleazy}{## even 'sleazy' is weird for this kind of thing. used car salesmen are sleazy, not neo-nazis, right. mmm. I'm just going to dodge it}
Dialogue: 10,0:21:25.82,0:21:27.05,Default,,0,0,0,,Like what, now?
Dialogue: 10,0:21:43.19,0:21:49.32,Default,,0,0,0,,Hey, hey, what's wrong? Did your power leave along with your ambition? {## uh, reasons. uh... the orig. sounds like 'Did both leave?' while this one is more like 'I know your ambition left, but your power too?', for reasons}
Dialogue: 10,0:21:50.07,0:21:53.43,Default,,0,0,0,,Say you'll join us, Ouni.
Dialogue: 10,0:21:53.43,0:21:57.84,Default,,0,0,0,,Aren't you the most bloodstained demon on this island?
Dialogue: 10,0:21:57.84,0:22:01.70,Default,,0,0,0,,You're a horrifying monster who's killed countless enemies.
Dialogue: 10,0:22:02.62,0:22:04.46,Default,,0,0,0,,Listen up, all of you! {## 'temera', right?}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:04.46,0:22:08.43,Default,,0,0,0,,We are strong! We're not like the Unmarked!
Dialogue: 10,0:22:08.43,0:22:10.64,Default,,0,0,0,,We have thymia!
Dialogue: 10,0:22:11.26,0:22:16.91,Default,,0,0,0,,With this power, we'll never be insulted or walked over again!
Dialogue: 10,0:22:16.91,0:22:18.27,Default,,0,0,0,,Maybe they're right...
Dialogue: 10,0:22:18.27,0:22:20.11,Default,,0,0,0,,No, it's impossible.
Dialogue: 10,0:22:21.44,0:22:22.57,Default,,0,0,0,,Come on, Ouni.
Dialogue: 10,0:22:23.00,0:22:25.32,Default,,0,0,0,,Let's show them our power.
Dialogue: 10,0:22:25.95,0:22:29.21,Default,,0,0,0,,We'll live strong and free. {## 'be strong and live free' has an odd cadence with the verb change, i don't like it. sidenote: O Canada}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:32.01,0:22:36.08,Default - th,,0,0,0,,A rudder by the name of Kokalo.\NFreedom by the name of a rudder. {## 'name of a rudder' feels a little off but it's small}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:36.08,0:22:43.42,Default - th,,0,0,0,,Even though we had found a new possibility, the Mud Whale lost its way and began wandering yet again.
Dialogue: 10,0:22:45.13,0:22:49.89,Default - th,,0,0,0,,The chains of the truth behind my short life {## really my dude, you should've seen this coming}
Dialogue: 0,0:22:49.89,0:22:53.05,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\pos(800,213.2)\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\c&H243247&\4a&HE6&\blur1.2\fad(0,178)}Passage 11
Dialogue: 0,0:22:49.89,0:22:53.05,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\pos(800,213.2)\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\shad9.6\c&H243247&\1a&HFE&\4a&HE6&\blur2.4\fad(0,178)}Passage 11
Dialogue: 0,0:22:49.89,0:22:53.05,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\pos(811,526)\fscx85\fscy85\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\b1\c&H243247&\4a&HE6&\blur1.2\fad(0,178)}We spoke of dreams
Dialogue: 0,0:22:49.89,0:22:53.05,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\pos(811,526)\fscx85\fscy85\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\b1\shad9.6\c&H243247&\1a&HFE&\4a&HE6&\blur2.4\fad(0,178)}We spoke of dreams
Dialogue: 10,0:22:50.69,0:22:52.39,Default - th,,0,0,0,,constrained me with their weight.
Dialogue: 0,0:22:52.39,0:23:00.15,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7459,7750,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}I rise before the sun wakes to swim beyond the furthest reaches
Dialogue: 0,0:22:52.39,0:23:00.15,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7459,7750,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}yoake mo matazu ni hate no sono saki wo oyogu
Dialogue: 1,0:22:52.39,0:23:00.15,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7459,7750,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(7440,7790,\1a&HFF&)}I rise before the sun wakes to swim beyond the furthest reaches
Dialogue: 1,0:22:52.39,0:23:00.15,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7459,7750,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(7440,7790,\1a&HFF&)}yoake mo matazu ni hate no sono saki wo oyogu
Dialogue: 2,0:22:52.39,0:23:00.15,ED,,0,0,0,,{\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(7459,7750,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}I {*\c&H9AC7F9&}r{*\c&H98C5F6&}i{*\c&H97C2F3&}s{*\c&H95C0F0&}e {*\c&H91BBEA&}b{*\c&H8FB9E7&}e{*\c&H8DB6E4&}f{*\c&H8BB4E1&}o{*\c&H8AB2DE&}r{*\c&H88AFDB&}e {*\c&H84AAD5&}t{*\c&H82A8D2&}h{*\c&H80A5CF&}e {*\c&H7CA1C9&}s{*\c&H7B9EC6&}u{*\c&H799CC3&}n {\c&H7597BD&}w{*\c&H779AC0&}a{*\c&H799CC3&}k{*\c&H7B9FC6&}e{*\c&H7DA1CA&}s {*\c&H81A6D0&}t{*\c&H83A9D3&}o {*\c&H87AED9&}s{*\c&H89B0DC&}w{*\c&H8AB3E0&}i{*\c&H8CB5E3&}m {*\c&H90BAE9&}b{*\c&H92BDEC&}e{*\c&H94BFEF&}y{*\c&H96C2F2&}o{*\c&H98C4F6&}n{*\c&H9AC7F9&}d {\c&H9ECCFF&}t{*\c&H9CC9FC&}h{*\c&H9AC6F8&}e {*\c&H95C1F1&}f{*\c&H93BEEE&}u{*\c&H91BBEA&}r{*\c&H8FB8E7&}t{*\c&H8DB6E3&}h{*\c&H8BB3E0&}e{*\c&H88B0DC&}s{*\c&H86ADD9&}t {*\c&H82A8D2&}r{*\c&H80A5CE&}e{*\c&H7EA2CB&}a{*\c&H7B9FC7&}c{*\c&H799DC4&}h{*\c&H779AC0&}e{\c&H7597BD&}s
Dialogue: 2,0:22:52.39,0:23:00.15,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(7459,7750,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}y{*\c&H9BC8FA&}o{*\c&H98C4F6&}a{*\c&H95C1F1&}k{*\c&H92BDEC&}e {*\c&H8CB5E3&}m{*\c&H8AB2DE&}o {*\c&H84AAD5&}m{*\c&H81A6D0&}a{*\c&H7EA2CB&}t{*\c&H7B9FC6&}a{*\c&H789BC2&}z{\c&H7597BD&}u {*\c&H7A9EC5&}n{*\c&H7DA1C9&}i {*\c&H82A8D2&}h{*\c&H84ABD6&}a{*\c&H87AEDA&}t{*\c&H8AB2DE&}e {*\c&H8FB8E6&}n{*\c&H91BBEA&}o {*\c&H96C2F3&}s{*\c&H99C5F7&}o{*\c&H9BC9FB&}n{\c&H9ECCFF&}o {*\c&H98C4F6&}s{*\c&H95C1F1&}a{*\c&H92BDEC&}k{*\c&H8FB9E7&}i {*\c&H8AB2DE&}w{*\c&H87AED9&}o {*\c&H81A6D0&}o{*\c&H7EA2CB&}y{*\c&H7B9FC6&}o{*\c&H789BC2&}g{\c&H7597BD&}u
Dialogue: 0,0:23:00.15,0:23:07.36,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6842,7134,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}We lay awake listening to memories within the song of bugs
Dialogue: 0,0:23:00.15,0:23:07.36,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6842,7134,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}mushi no uta nemurazu kimi to kiita kioku
Dialogue: 1,0:23:00.15,0:23:07.36,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6842,7134,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6830,7180,\1a&HFF&)}We lay awake listening to memories within the song of bugs
Dialogue: 1,0:23:00.15,0:23:07.36,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(6842,7134,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(6830,7180,\1a&HFF&)}mushi no uta nemurazu kimi to kiita kioku
Dialogue: 2,0:23:00.15,0:23:07.36,ED,,0,0,0,,{\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6842,7134,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}W{*\c&H9CC9FC&}e {*\c&H98C4F5&}l{*\c&H95C1F1&}a{*\c&H93BEEE&}y {*\c&H8FB8E7&}a{*\c&H8DB6E3&}w{*\c&H8BB3E0&}a{*\c&H88B0DC&}k{*\c&H86ADD9&}e {*\c&H82A8D2&}l{*\c&H80A5CE&}i{*\c&H7EA2CB&}s{*\c&H7B9FC7&}t{*\c&H799DC4&}e{*\c&H779AC0&}n{\c&H7597BD&}i{*\c&H779AC0&}n{*\c&H799DC4&}g {*\c&H7EA2CB&}t{*\c&H80A5CE&}o {*\c&H84ABD5&}m{*\c&H86ADD9&}e{*\c&H88B0DC&}m{*\c&H8BB3E0&}o{*\c&H8DB6E3&}r{*\c&H8FB8E7&}i{*\c&H91BBEA&}e{*\c&H93BEEE&}s {*\c&H98C4F5&}w{*\c&H9AC6F8&}i{*\c&H9CC9FC&}t{\c&H9ECCFF&}h{*\c&H9CC9FC&}i{*\c&H9AC6F8&}n {*\c&H95C1F1&}t{*\c&H93BEEE&}h{*\c&H91BBEA&}e {*\c&H8DB6E3&}s{*\c&H8BB3E0&}o{*\c&H88B0DC&}n{*\c&H86ADD9&}g {*\c&H82A8D2&}o{*\c&H80A5CE&}f {*\c&H7B9FC7&}b{*\c&H799DC4&}u{*\c&H779AC0&}g{\c&H7597BD&}s
Dialogue: 2,0:23:00.15,0:23:07.36,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(6842,7134,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}m{*\c&H9BC8FA&}u{*\c&H98C4F6&}s{*\c&H95C1F1&}h{*\c&H92BDEC&}i {*\c&H8CB5E3&}n{*\c&H8AB2DE&}o {*\c&H84AAD5&}u{*\c&H81A6D0&}t{*\c&H7EA2CB&}a {*\c&H789BC2&}n{\c&H7597BD&}e{*\c&H789BC2&}m{*\c&H7B9FC7&}u{*\c&H7EA3CC&}r{*\c&H82A7D1&}a{*\c&H85ABD6&}z{*\c&H88AFDB&}u {*\c&H8EB8E6&}k{*\c&H91BCEB&}i{*\c&H95C0F0&}m{*\c&H98C4F5&}i {\c&H9ECCFF&}t{*\c&H9BC8FA&}o {*\c&H95C0F0&}k{*\c&H91BCEB&}i{*\c&H8EB8E6&}i{*\c&H8BB4E1&}t{*\c&H88AFDB&}a {*\c&H82A7D1&}k{*\c&H7EA3CC&}i{*\c&H7B9FC7&}o{*\c&H789BC2&}k{\c&H7597BD&}u
Dialogue: 0,0:23:07.36,0:23:15.12,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7462,7754,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}Just keep holding my hand, I'll accept half-cold purple, travel to faraway lands
Dialogue: 0,0:23:07.36,0:23:15.12,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7462,7754,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}te wo tada musunde hashitairo demo tooi kuni demo
Dialogue: 1,0:23:07.36,0:23:15.12,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7462,7754,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(7440,7790,\1a&HFF&)}Just keep holding my hand, I'll accept half-cold purple, travel to faraway lands
Dialogue: 1,0:23:07.36,0:23:15.12,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(7462,7754,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(7440,7790,\1a&HFF&)}te wo tada musunde hashitairo demo tooi kuni demo
Dialogue: 2,0:23:07.36,0:23:15.12,ED,,0,0,0,,{\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(7462,7754,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}J{*\c&H9DCAFD&}u{*\c&H9BC8FA&}s{*\c&H9AC6F8&}t {*\c&H97C3F3&}k{*\c&H95C1F1&}e{*\c&H94BFEE&}e{*\c&H92BDEC&}p {*\c&H8FB9E7&}h{*\c&H8EB7E5&}o{*\c&H8CB5E3&}l{*\c&H8BB3E0&}d{*\c&H8AB2DE&}i{*\c&H88B0DC&}n{*\c&H87AED9&}g {*\c&H84AAD5&}m{*\c&H82A8D2&}y {*\c&H7FA4CE&}h{*\c&H7EA2CB&}a{*\c&H7CA0C9&}n{*\c&H7B9FC6&}d{*\c&H799DC4&}, {*\c&H7699BF&}I{\c&H7597BD&}'{*\c&H7799C0&}l{*\c&H789BC2&}l {*\c&H7C9FC8&}a{*\c&H7DA2CA&}c{*\c&H7FA4CD&}c{*\c&H80A6CF&}e{*\c&H82A8D2&}p{*\c&H84AAD5&}t {*\c&H87AEDA&}h{*\c&H89B0DD&}a{*\c&H8AB3DF&}l{*\c&H8CB5E2&}f{*\c&H8EB7E5&}-{*\c&H8FB9E7&}c{*\c&H91BBEA&}o{*\c&H93BDED&}l{*\c&H94BFEF&}d {*\c&H97C4F4&}p{*\c&H99C6F7&}u{*\c&H9BC8FA&}r{*\c&H9CCAFC&}p{\c&H9ECCFF&}l{*\c&H9CCAFC&}e{*\c&H9BC8FA&}, {*\c&H98C4F5&}t{*\c&H96C2F2&}r{*\c&H95C0F0&}a{*\c&H93BEED&}v{*\c&H91BCEB&}e{*\c&H90BAE8&}l {*\c&H8DB6E3&}t{*\c&H8BB4E1&}o {*\c&H88AFDB&}f{*\c&H86ADD9&}a{*\c&H85ABD6&}r{*\c&H83A9D4&}a{*\c&H82A7D1&}w{*\c&H80A5CF&}a{*\c&H7EA3CC&}y {*\c&H7B9FC7&}l{*\c&H7A9DC5&}a{*\c&H789BC2&}n{*\c&H7799C0&}d{\c&H7597BD&}s
Dialogue: 2,0:23:07.36,0:23:15.12,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(7462,7754,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}t{*\c&H9CC9FB&}e {*\c&H97C3F3&}w{*\c&H94C0EF&}o {*\c&H90B9E8&}t{*\c&H8DB6E4&}a{*\c&H8BB3E0&}d{*\c&H88B0DC&}a {*\c&H83AAD4&}m{*\c&H81A7D0&}u{*\c&H7FA3CD&}s{*\c&H7CA0C9&}u{*\c&H7A9DC5&}n{*\c&H779AC1&}d{\c&H7597BD&}e {*\c&H7A9EC6&}h{*\c&H7DA2CA&}a{*\c&H80A5CF&}s{*\c&H83A9D3&}h{*\c&H85ACD7&}i{*\c&H88B0DC&}t{*\c&H8BB3E0&}a{*\c&H8EB7E5&}i{*\c&H90BAE9&}r{*\c&H93BEED&}o {*\c&H99C5F6&}d{*\c&H9BC8FB&}e{\c&H9ECCFF&}m{*\c&H9BC9FB&}o {*\c&H96C2F3&}t{*\c&H94BFEE&}o{*\c&H91BBEA&}o{*\c&H8FB8E6&}i {*\c&H8AB2DE&}k{*\c&H87AEDA&}u{*\c&H84ABD6&}n{*\c&H82A8D2&}i {*\c&H7DA1C9&}d{*\c&H7A9EC5&}e{*\c&H789AC1&}m{\c&H7597BD&}o
Dialogue: 0,0:23:15.12,0:23:27.30,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(11851,12143,\blur3.6\fs76.8)}Let's go to embrace this dream born of our short lifetimes
Dialogue: 0,0:23:15.12,0:23:27.30,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord2.4\c&H254859&\3c&H254859&\1a&H80&\3a&H80&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(11851,12143,\blur3.6\fs70.8)}mijikai isshou ni umareta yume wo dakishime ni yukou
Dialogue: 1,0:23:15.12,0:23:27.30,ED,,0,0,0,,{\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(11851,12143,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(11810,12160,\1a&HFF&)}Let's go to embrace this dream born of our short lifetimes
Dialogue: 1,0:23:15.12,0:23:27.30,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\bord1.2\c&H000000&\1a&HFF&\blur6\fad(350,350)\t(11851,12143,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\t(0,350,\1a&H00&)\t(11810,12160,\1a&HFF&)}mijikai isshou ni umareta yume wo dakishime ni yukou
Dialogue: 2,0:23:15.12,0:23:27.30,ED,,0,0,0,,{\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(11851,12143,\blur3.6\fs76.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}L{*\c&H9CC9FC&}e{*\c&H9AC7F8&}t{*\c&H98C4F5&}'{*\c&H96C1F2&}s {*\c&H92BCEB&}g{*\c&H90B9E8&}o {*\c&H8CB4E1&}t{*\c&H8AB2DE&}o {*\c&H85ACD7&}e{*\c&H83AAD4&}m{*\c&H81A7D1&}b{*\c&H7FA4CE&}r{*\c&H7DA2CA&}a{*\c&H7B9FC7&}c{*\c&H799CC4&}e {\c&H7597BD&}t{*\c&H779AC0&}h{*\c&H799CC4&}i{*\c&H7B9FC7&}s {*\c&H7FA4CE&}d{*\c&H81A7D1&}r{*\c&H83AAD4&}e{*\c&H85ACD7&}a{*\c&H87AFDB&}m {*\c&H8CB4E1&}b{*\c&H8EB7E5&}o{*\c&H90B9E8&}r{*\c&H92BCEB&}n {*\c&H96C1F2&}o{*\c&H98C4F5&}f {*\c&H9CC9FC&}o{\c&H9ECCFF&}u{*\c&H9CC9FB&}r {*\c&H97C3F3&}s{*\c&H94C0EF&}h{*\c&H92BCEC&}o{*\c&H90B9E8&}r{*\c&H8DB6E4&}t {*\c&H88B0DC&}l{*\c&H86ADD8&}i{*\c&H83AAD4&}f{*\c&H81A7D0&}e{*\c&H7FA3CD&}t{*\c&H7CA0C9&}i{*\c&H7A9DC5&}m{*\c&H779AC1&}e{\c&H7597BD&}s
Dialogue: 2,0:23:15.12,0:23:27.30,ED,,0,0,0,,{\pos(960,944.4)\fs74.4\blur1.08\fad(350,350)\t(11851,12143,\blur3.6\fs70.8)\c&H9ECCFF&}m{*\c&H9CC9FB&}i{*\c&H99C6F8&}j{*\c&H97C3F4&}i{*\c&H95C0F0&}k{*\c&H93BDED&}a{*\c&H90BAE9&}i {*\c&H8CB4E2&}i{*\c&H8AB2DE&}s{*\c&H87AFDA&}s{*\c&H85ACD7&}h{*\c&H83A9D3&}o{*\c&H80A6CF&}u {*\c&H7CA0C8&}n{*\c&H7A9DC4&}i {\c&H7597BD&}u{*\c&H779AC1&}m{*\c&H7A9DC5&}a{*\c&H7CA0C9&}r{*\c&H7FA3CD&}e{*\c&H81A7D0&}t{*\c&H83AAD4&}a {*\c&H88B0DC&}y{*\c&H8BB3E0&}u{*\c&H8DB6E4&}m{*\c&H90B9E8&}e {*\c&H94C0EF&}w{*\c&H97C3F3&}o {*\c&H9CC9FB&}d{\c&H9ECCFF&}a{*\c&H9BC9FB&}k{*\c&H99C5F7&}i{*\c&H96C2F3&}s{*\c&H94BFEE&}h{*\c&H91BBEA&}i{*\c&H8FB8E6&}m{*\c&H8CB5E2&}e {*\c&H87AEDA&}n{*\c&H84ABD6&}i {*\c&H7FA4CE&}y{*\c&H7DA1C9&}u{*\c&H7A9EC5&}k{*\c&H789AC1&}o{\c&H7597BD&}u
Dialogue: 0,0:23:26.50,0:23:37.14,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\move(725,164.2,737.4,183.15,28,10622)\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\c&H243247&\4a&HE6&\blur0.6\fade(255,0,255,0,0,9140,10640)\clip()\t(28,10622,\fscx95.37)\t(28,10622,\fscy95.37)}Final Passage
Dialogue: 0,0:23:26.50,0:23:37.14,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\move(723,483,739.24,479.75,28,10539)\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\c&H243247&\4a&HE6&\blur0.6\fade(255,0,255,0,0,9140,10640)\clip()\t(28,10622,\fscx95.37)\t(28,10622,\fscy95.37)}I'm glad
Dialogue: 0,0:23:26.50,0:23:37.14,Signs,,0,0,0,,{\an6\move(723,570.4,739.24,567.14,28,10539)\fnFOT-TsukuAOldMin Pr6 B\fs133.2\c&H243247&\4a&HE6&\blur0.6\fade(255,0,255,0,0,9140,10640)\clip()\t(28,10622,\fscx95.37)\t(28,10622,\fscy95.37)}I was born here
Dialogue: 0,0:23:39.89,0:23:39.94,Default,,0,0,0,,